I agree with Tim on "mouth-cave." To better match your surrounding language, you could use "oral cave" or "oral cavity" (or something different and much better haha).
I was also going to talk about giving us the rest of her body. You might try staying away from the breasts, vagina, etc.--anything that is usually associated with sex. It could be a challenge to describe her and the feelings that she invokes using unusual areas.
I also kind of want to hear her voice, to get an idea of the things that the speaker wants to hear so badly so that we feel that too. I'm not sure about any other drafts to include this in, but I think you have a good start with this!
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